Thursday 29 January 2015

Pitch Feedback


Pitch Feedback: 
- Change the name of the film- Mugged is too literal
- Need a key prop for the main character to give more information about them
- the gang needs to be  anonymous- wear all black
- Film in the daytime to show the transition of light to dark
   - make it realistic/believable add emotion to the character

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